Heres the link to my latest card effect called Killer Kings.Comments thx :lol:

http://youtube.com/watch?v=BHVr_W-0lxY

I recently came up with this effect that I have yet to perform for real people.

woo this trick quite nice :D

Wow.. that was a surprisingly bad performance. :(

FAR TOO MUCH fiddling with the cards, and the first table ribbon spread was what made me say your performance was bad. Also, the fact that you were doing misc cuts/flourishes and fans throughout the performance for literally no apparent reason was terrible. Sorry to say that, but it didn't look half professional and good as it could be. :(

It quite honestly looked like you were bored out of your mind as you were filming that. Have a LOT more enthusiasm when performing and/or filming. Otherwise it rubs off on the audience and they'll be the ones falling asleep with you.

As for the effect itself, it could be ten times better, method-wise AND performance-wise. The major thing I disliked about this is the fact that dupes needed to be used. You could do this whole routine WITHOUT the use of extra cards, and no forces.

I highly reccomend you work on smoothness in performance, and make the method a little more impromptu.

- Lapping.

I value all comments I get from magicians.You gave me in a detailed manner.Thanks.I will look more making the performance better and more smooth.But however,a little thing I wanna add.Yes,I did use forces,but I did not use any dupes.I just created this effect less than 24 hours ago,I thought I just uploaded it early.I usually work on the trick first,then only the presentation.Which was what I think made the video very lame and boring.Anyway,thanks.I'll upload again when I think I'm more smooth with this effect.

Jarrett

nice video,*thumb up*!!!

it doesn't nid duplicate cards!!!!totally IMPROMPTU....
Jarrett...this effect is originally by u??I hope u dun mind bcuz i have figured it out..XD

hey Jarrett i like your creativity, keep it up :)

however pal, there is comething i must tell you about the effect.
1stly, how are you going to start your effect? how are you taking those four kings out from the deck?

2ndly, the effect too lengthy. Your audiences will get bored coz the magic is repeating itself 3 times in a row. it's also very confusing( maybe it's due to the length of the effect) and when you come to the climax the energy level is very low and the respond will not be as big compare to a more straight forward effect.

3rdly, like what Lapping stated, tooooo much florishes without a meaning. if you're doing a gambling demostration it's alright BUT when performing card magic, try not to put in flourishes. to the audience the magic effect is just a showing off of skill if you're capable of controling cards.

keep your creative juices flowing and hope to see ya soon :)

(vanished to mug for exam)

Honestly I cannot finished the video. no comments.

Ohhh!! I see what you did, excellent dude. I give you credit for that, you got one passed me. ;)

Cool.

- Lapping.