This is the first trick i created. Hope you guys will enjoy. Please leave me comment. Where to improve or what.. Enjoy.. :) thanks

http://youtube.com/watch?v=h3OR642lFXM

Victor can you try to use 2 different cards next time?Because both jacks the first time i see like kinda blur, then the second time i see i only know it change places :). Just my suggestion.

i personally don't like your kind of DL. I prefer strike DL coz its looks more natural and you can do a DL any time which helps you do other tricks that use extensive DL ^_^

Some important points on the trick to improve handling
You need to cut out some unneeded movements which dont make much sense..to me anyway
I can see the general idea of your trick and it's pretty good

here's my 2cents:
1) work on your double lift (seems a little dogdy...coz im a magician maybe..)

2) was the purpose of dribbling the loose packet onto the other one a magical gesture? was there a point in it? All your movements should have a motive.

3) the presentation was incoherent i.e the way you lost the 2 cards into the packets were different. You should give the 1st pack some cuts after putting the card into the middle so that you can use a cut control(e.g double undecut etc.) for the second card instead of just peeling a card to the bottom, if not it just seems kinda dodgy.(Merely an example...simplest method)

4) during the 1st revelation of the cards (the packets bound by the rubberband), after the steal you cut the cards...whats the motive for cutting the cards? the spectator would be suspicious of the sudden unneeded cutting of cards. Try using a turnover pass instead (Doesn't have to be a pass).

5) during the second revelation, why was the card at the bottom of the packet instead of in the middle (must be coherent with the plot)? once again can be solved with a turn over pass (doesn't have to be a pass) OR you could have slotted it into the middle of the packet when showing the second jack (after u put the rubberband on the 1st packet)


If the description seems kinda blur or unclear just pm me for some more insight and I can guide you step by step....but thanks for sharing the trick....has much potential.

I'll be waiting for a re-shoot lol

1) Lose the music

2) Buy better CD

3) Your DL is fine for laymen. To magicians no, but to laymen it should suffice.

4) As Amane has pointed out, there are several things you've done that are a bit out of order i.e. the dribble and the cut.

5) Black Tiger Deck hurt my eyes. This is just a personal preference though.