Looks good syafiq. I think u've gotten the moves down pat.
Though, i think u need a camera that doesn't lag so much..... disrupts the whole beauty of flourishing. :P
No credits??
And was that ur lil sis in the background? Hehe....
hey shafiq,
Not a bad video for a person who's just starting out.
Things to work on:
- Cam quality needs to be improved. Perhaps work on some angle and get proper lightings to make vid more interesting. Vid presentation plays a big part in the entertainment part.
oK,... technically wise,
- Work on ya one hand revolution (OHR).
- U getting the sybling down ok. Just keep practicing and u'll get smooth. After that, u can combine it with the OHR
- Erdnase change... i think it'll be better to change it on the down stroke. But the other change where u snap/drop the card onto the table was good.
All in all keep all. Good. Keep it up!
Cheers,
Brendan
video quality
flashing in the video is annoying
pauses in the flourishes
i think that's all i can think about... take brendan's advice though.